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When was the happiest time of your life? Why? I had really good time one month ago. I went to the Europe with my friends. It was really good exprience to travel around new countrys. It was the happiest time because I could be away from daily life. There was no stress, so I can just enjoy the bueatiful things. When I was Hallstatt, espeacially, there was beautiful lake and mountine. The small village was so cozy. I had great relax at Hallstatt. Also I had great fun with my friends. Someday, I want to go back.

Hi [이름]! Thank you for your homework. I had fun reading it. Anyway, please check my corrections. Have a nice day~ ~KeLLy~ When was the happiest time of your life? Why?I had really good time one month ago. >> I had a really good time a month ago. I went to the Europe with my friends. >> Correct. It was really good exprience to travel around new countrys. >> It was really a good experience to travel in other countries. It was the happiest time because I could be away from daily life. >> It was the happiest time of my life because I expereinced soemthing different from my daily activities. There was no stress, so I can just enjoy the bueatiful things. >> There was no stress, so I can just enjoy the beautiful things around me. When I was Hallstatt, espeacially, there was beautiful lake and mountine. >> When I was in Hallstatt, there was a beautiful lake and a mountain. The small village was so cozy. >> Correct. I had great relax at Hallstatt. >> I had great relaxed time at Hallstatt. Also I had great fun with my friends. >> Also, I had a great and fun moment with my friends. Someday, I want to go back. >> Someday, I want to go back there.