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2014-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Are cooking shows popular in your country? Do you watch any cooking shows? I am not intrested in cooking shows. In my country, there isn't famous cooking show. However, some of my friends like to watch cooking shows from U.S.A. Although I cannot remember the name of cooking show, it was survival cooking show. Every time, they got new subject to compete. After competition, the loser have to go home. I just watched with my friend. It was interesting, but it was not my style. So I don't usually watch cooking shows.

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Hello [이름]! I appreciate your effort in sharing a cooking show which you have seen. Even if you are not interested in cooking shows, you were alble to impart something regarding our homework. Good job! ~KeLLy~ Are cooking shows popular in your country? Do you watch any cooking shows?I am not intrested in cooking shows. >> Correct. In my country, there isn\'t famous cooking show. >> In my country, there isn\'t a famous cooking show. However, some of my friends like to watch cooking shows from U.S.A. >> However, some of my friends like to watch cooking shows from the U.S.A. Although I cannot remember the name of cooking show, it was survival cooking show. >> Although I cannot remember the title of cooking show, it was a survival cooking show. Every time, they got new subject to compete. >> Did you mean: They always have a new recipe to cook. After competition, the loser have to go home. >> After the competition, the loser will go home. I just watched with my friend. >> Correct. It was interesting, but it was not my style. >> Correct. So I don\'t usually watch cooking shows. >> Correct.

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