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2014-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Do you think drinking coffee is good for our health? I think drinking coffee is good for our health. I love drinking coffee. coffee has a lot of good effect. First, caffeine which is in the coffee gives us power to move actively. Second, delicious coffee makes us happy. I think it help us to stay in good mood, and also it can reduce stress. Third, coffee can lower the probabillty to have disease. However, all these can happen when we drink a proper amount of coffee in a day. To many coffee and caffeine can hurt us.

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Hi there!Thank you for sending this in. Please review my corrections. Have a great day! ~KeLLy~ Do you think drinking coffee is good for our health?I think drinking coffee is good for our health. >> Correct. I love drinking coffee. >> Correct. coffee has a lot of good effect. >> Coffee has a lot of benefits. First, caffeine which is in the coffee gives us power to move actively. >> Firstly, caffeine gives us power to move actively. Second, delicious coffee makes us happy. >> Secondly, a delicious coffee makes us happy. I think it help us to stay in good mood, and also it can reduce stress. >> I think it helps us to stay in good mood, and also it can reduce stress. Third, coffee can lower the probabillty to have disease. >>Thirdly, coffee can lower the probabillty for humans to have a disease. However, all these can happen when we drink a proper amount of coffee in a day. >> Correct. To many coffee and caffeine can hurt us. >> Drinking too much coffee can harm us.

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