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2014-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.b 2.b 3.a 4.b 5.b 6.a 7.c 8.a 9.a 10.b The Goby and shrimps are safe until today. Nothing eat and heart them. But I can't find Goby. And the shrimps are ready to lay eggs.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon TOM!

Marvelous homework! Yipee!

I love reading your essays. ^^ Keep it up!

Wow! Goby and shrimps.

Really? I want to see a shrimp laying eggs. Hahaha.

I haven\'t seen one yet. Poor teacher, right? Hihihihi!

I hope that you can find Goby.

Please go over the corrections I provided for you.

I will give you some words on your next homework and try to make some sentences, okay?

I really want you to improve your skills. Let\'s work hard together.

Talk to you later.
Teacher Nina

 

1.b

>> CORRECT!
2.b

>> CORRECT!
3.a

>> C
4.b

>> CORRECT!
5.b

>> CORRECT!
6.a

>> CORRECT!
7.c

>> CORRECT!
8.a

>> CORRECT!
9.a

>> B
10.b

>> C

The Goby and shrimps are safe until today.

>> CORRECT!
Nothing eat and heart them.

>> Did you mean: Nothing eats and hurt them.

>> OR: Nothing bad happened to them,
But I can\'t find Goby.

>> CORRECT!
And the shrimps are ready to lay eggs.

>> CORRECT!

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