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How can the press balance freedom of expression with respect for privacy?
I am not sure that I understand this question correctly, so please correct me if I understand wrong.
>> I am not sure whether I understood your question correctly, so please correct me if I misunderstood it.
I understand \'the press\' as place where it publish news or books.
>> I understand \'the press\' as a place where we publish news or books.
Well, it was to hard to answer but I try my best.
>> Well, it was to hard to answer but I will try my best.
I think it is hard to the press to make balance freedom of expression with respect for privacy.
>> I think it is hard for the press to balance freedom of expression with respect for privacy.
And I think privacy is more important then freedom of expression.
>> And I think privacy is more important than freedom of expression.
So they should not violate a person\'s privacy.
>> Correct.
They should first think about proctecting one\'s privacy.
>> They should first think about protecting one\'s privacy.
However, if it is serious problem that everyone must know, then they should let people to know true.
>> However, if it is a serious problem that everyone must know, then they should let the people know the truth.
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