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2014-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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How can the press balance freedom of expression with respect for privacy? I am not sure that I understand this question correctly, so please correct me if I understand wrong. I understand 'the press' as place where it publish news or books.Well, it was to hard to answer but I try my best. I think it is hard to the press to make balance freedom of expression with respect for privacy. And I think privacy is more important then freedom of expression. So they should not violate a person's privacy. They should first think about proctecting one's privacy. However, if it is serious problem that everyone must know, then they should let people to know true.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!

Thank you for doing your doing homework and for trying to answer the question even if it is hard for you. I appreciate your effort. Anyway, please check my corrections.

~KeLLy~

How can the press balance freedom of expression with respect for privacy?

I am not sure that I understand this question correctly, so please correct me if I understand wrong.

>> I am not sure whether I understood your question correctly, so please correct me if I misunderstood it.

I understand \'the press\' as place where it publish news or books.

>> I understand \'the press\' as a place where we publish news or books.

Well, it was to hard to answer but I try my best.
>> Wel
l, it was to hard to answer but I will try my best. 
I think it is hard to the press to make balance freedom of expression with respect for privacy.

>> I think it is hard for the press to balance freedom of expression with respect for privacy.

And I think privacy is more important then freedom of expression.

>> And I think privacy is more important than freedom of expression.

So they should not violate a person\'s privacy.

>> Correct.

They should first think about proctecting one\'s privacy.

>> They should first think about protecting one\'s privacy.

However, if it is serious problem that everyone must know, then they should let people to know true.
>>
However, if it is a serious problem that everyone must know, then they should let the people know the truth.

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