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Why do you think a lot of women fall for humorous guys? 
I think most of women fall for humorus guys for several reason.
>> I think most women fall for humorus guys for several reasons.
First, the humorous guys makes us always laugh.

>> Firstly, humorous guys make us laugh always.

And laughing makes us stay in a good mood.

>> And laughing gives us a good mood.

Second, when we laugh, the everthing looks good.

>> Secondly, when we laugh, everything around us looks good.

Even though the men was not my stlye, it can be change.

>> Even though a man is not my type, I can learn how to like him.

So most women change their mind about men after talking with him.

>>So most women change their perception about men after talking with them.

Lastly, the humor makes women to relax.

>> Lastly, a humor can help women relax.

The serious situation can change to comportable situation.

>> Any serious situation can become comfortable.