homework

2014-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

학생이 쓴 원문

I need to buy a book right now. A book named A has information as enormous as space. A book named B has information as deep as god's patient. I should buy either A or B. Which books do I buy? _____ Is it right?

강사 첨삭

A wonderful day to you [이름]! ^^ Good job on your homework. ^^ If you notice the corrections made, I just replaced some words to describe the object of the senctence more accurately. Keep building your vocabulary and I\'m sure that you can do an even better job in making comparative sentences. You are doing a fantastic job as one of my most intelligent students, keep it up!   Wishing you all the best, Teacher Charlie <3   I need to buy a book right now. >> CORRECT A book named A has information as enormous as space. >> A book entitled A has information as abundant as the stars. A book named B has information as deep as god\'s patient. >> A book entitled B has information as deep as God\'s patience. I should buy either A or B. >> CORRECT  Which books do I buy? >> Which book do I buy?   _____ Is it right?

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