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One of my best characteristics is socializing with other people in a short time. When I meet people at first, I make a good mood with a sense of humor or listening to their interest by talking. They say to me, you are a very sociable person I ‘ve ever met.
The tale shows the percentage of consumer spending by category in five countries in the year 2002.
It is clear that food, drink and tobacco are the highest proportion of the expenditures while leisure and education are the least in all five countries.
Turkey people have the most and the least expenditure, formerly at 32.14% in food, drinks and tabacco and 4.35% in leisure and education among those countries. In clothing and foot wear, Italy is the highest proportion with 9%. Swedish is the least spending in food, drinks and tobacco with 15.77% and 5.4 % in clothing and footwear.
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One of my best characteristics is socializing with other people in a short time.
>>CORRECT
When I meet people at first, I make a good mood with a sense of humor or listening to their interest by talking.
>>When I meet people for the first time, I settle a good mood using my sense of humor, or by listening to their interest by talking.
They say to me, you are a very sociable person I ‘ve ever met.
>>They say to me, you are the most sociable person I\'ve ever met.
The tale shows the percentage of consumer spending by category in five countries in the year 2002.
>>The diagram or the table shows the percentage of consumer spending by category in five countries in 2002.
It is clear that food, drink and tobacco are the highest proportion of the expenditures while leisure and education are the least in all five countries.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> ...of the expenditures, while leisure... (add comma)
Turkey people have the most and the least expenditure, formerly at 32.14% in food, drinks and tabacco and 4.35% in leisure and education among those countries.
>>Turkish (or the people in Turkey) have the most and the least expenditure, formerly at 32.14% in food, drinks and tabacco and 4.35% in leisure and education among those countries.
In clothing and foot wear, Italy is the highest proportion with 9%.
>>CORRECT
Swedish is the least spending in food, drinks and tobacco with 15.77% and 5.4 % in clothing and footwear.
>>CORRECT
Happy Thursday to you my dear.
Thanks for putting an effort in doing your homework.
I know you\'re busy, but you are still diligent in class :)
Keep that up!
__T.Myra
One of my best characteristics is socializing with other people in a short time.
>>CORRECT
When I meet people at first, I make a good mood with a sense of humor or listening to their interest by talking.
>>When I meet people for the first time, I settle a good mood using my sense of humor, or by listening to their interest by talking.
They say to me, you are a very sociable person I ‘ve ever met.
>>They say to me, you are the most sociable person I\'ve ever met.
The tale shows the percentage of consumer spending by category in five countries in the year 2002.
>>The diagram or the table shows the percentage of consumer spending by category in five countries in 2002.
It is clear that food, drink and tobacco are the highest proportion of the expenditures while leisure and education are the least in all five countries.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> ...of the expenditures, while leisure... (add comma)
Turkey people have the most and the least expenditure, formerly at 32.14% in food, drinks and tabacco and 4.35% in leisure and education among those countries.
>>Turkish (or the people in Turkey) have the most and the least expenditure, formerly at 32.14% in food, drinks and tabacco and 4.35% in leisure and education among those countries.
In clothing and foot wear, Italy is the highest proportion with 9%.
>>CORRECT
Swedish is the least spending in food, drinks and tobacco with 15.77% and 5.4 % in clothing and footwear.
>>CORRECT
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