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2014-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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My score was too bad yesterday so I'm sad. I should have considered tense. I try to challange 100 points today. I velieve I can do it now. hahaha. Choose the appropriate idiomatic expressions. piece of cake, odds and ends, pros and cons, ups and downs 1. The teacher asked us to talk about the Pros and cons of industrial development 2. The police found nothing special in the house of the criminal as he had taken all the important documents with him, leaving just pros and cons. 3. Don't worry about the problems you have in your business. You know there are always ups and downs in business. 4. If you think that doing this maths problem is a piece of cake just try it. How do you have a plan for weekend. I want to take a rest alone. I watch a movie and make a dilicious food. Of course, cook is simple such as backing sweet photato or peeling fruits. Is it not cook? Hahaha sorry. Why do I get up early every and why do I sad every sunday night?:) Hahaha. Thnaks. Take care.

강사 첨삭

Hi!

Thank you for your composition my dear student. 

Continue practicing the use of the following idiomatic expressions.

Don\'t feel bad about your score anymore, just redeem yourself. You can do it!

~T. Shanee

Here are my corrections: :)

My score was too bad yesterday so I\'m sad.

>> Correct!

I should have considered tense.

>> I should have considered the tenses.

I try to challange 100 points today.

>> I\'ll try to take the 100-point challenge today.

OR>> I\'ll try to challenge myself to get a hundred points today.

I velieve I can do it now. hahaha.
>> I believe I can do it now.
Choose the appropriate idiomatic expressions.
piece of cake, odds and ends, pros and cons, ups and downs
1. The teacher asked us to talk about the Pros and cons of industrial development
>> 1. The teacher asked us to talk about the pros and cons of industrial development.
2. The police found nothing special in the house of the criminal as he had taken all the important documents with him, leaving just pros and cons.
>> 2. The police found nothing special in the house of the criminal as he taken all the important documents with him, leaving just odds and ends.

3. Don\'t worry about the problems you have in your business. You know there are always ups and downs in business.
>> Correct!

4. If you think that doing this maths problem is a piece of cake just try it.
>> Correct!

How do you have a plan for weekend.

>> How do you make a plan for the weekend?

OR>> How do you plan for the weekend?

I want to take a rest alone.

>> Correct!

OR>> I want to rest alone.

I watch a movie and make a dilicious food.

>> I will watch a movie and make delicious food.

Of course, cook is simple such as backing sweet photato or peeling fruits.

>> Of course, cooking will be simple such as baking sweet potatoes or peeling fruits.

Is it not cook? Hahaha sorry.

>> Aren\'t they cooked? Isn\'t this cooking? X)) 

Why do I get up early every and why do I sad every sunday night?:) Hahaha. Thnaks. Take care.

>> Why do I get up early every day and why am I sad every Sunday night? Thanks. Take care!^^ 

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