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Do you like expensive restaurants? What's the most expensive meal you've had at a restaurant?
I do like expensive restaurants. The food is so delicious. Also, the restaurant's atmospher is elegant. The waitress are so kind and gentle. We can not only enjoy delicious food, but also we can enjoy polishing atmospher. The only promblem is too expensive, so we can not go everyday. We only go on the speacial day like birthday, graduation day, and annivarsary. The most expensive meal I ate at restaurant is king crap. Plenty of delicous was provied. Our family ate until we couldn't eat anymore.
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Do you like expensive restaurants? What\'s the most expensive meal you\'ve had at a restaurant?I do like expensive restaurants.
>> Correct.
The food is so delicious.
>> Correct.
Also, the restaurant\'s atmospher is elegant.
>> Also, the restaurant\'s ambiance is elegant.
The waitress are so kind and gentle.
>> The waitresses are so kind and gentle.
We can not only enjoy delicious food, but also we can enjoy polishing atmospher.
>> We can not only enjoy delicious foods, but also the nice ambiance.
The only promblem is too expensive, so we can not go everyday.
>> The only problem is that, it\'s too expensive, so we can\'t eat there everyday.
We only go on the speacial day like birthday, graduation day, and annivarsary.
>> We only go there on special days like birthdays, graduation day, and anniversaries.
The most expensive meal I ate at restaurant is king crap.
>> The most expensive meal I ate at a restaurant was king crap.
Plenty of delicous was provied.
>> There were many delicious foods that were served.
Our family ate until we couldn\'t eat anymore.
>> Our family ate until we were so full that we counldn\'t eat anymore.
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