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Let us talk about sports : How can coaches best encourage their athletes to do their best?
It is important of coaches to understand their athletes' character.
Each of athletes have various personality.
Therefore, coaches have to advise and encourage to their athletes accordingly to their athletes' character.
강사 첨삭
Good sport conduct or sportspersonship is the behaviors appropriate of a sport participant. Sportspersonship occurs when athletes show respect and concern to opponents, teammates, coaches, and officials. In other words, coaches should teach their athletes to 'treat others, as you would like to be treated.' Sportspersonship is an important issue facing all people involved in athletics. Anyway, have a great day ahead dear. I will talk to you soon. So, just seat back and relax for now.
-Teacher Chloe
Let us talk about sports : How can coaches best encourage their athletes to do their best?It is important of coaches to understand their athletes\' character.
>>It is important to coaches to understand the character of their athletes.
Each of athletes have various personality.
>>Each athlete has different personality. Therefore, coaches have to advise and encourage to their athletes accordingly to their athletes\' character.
>>Therefore, coaches have to advise and encourage their athletes accordingly to their characters and personalities.
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