homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes children sometimes do chores.
Because it is good to have sense of independence.
And doing a housework help their mothers to feel boastiful.
So I think children sometimes do chores.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Tom.
Happy first day of September. ^^
You are right! We should help our parents with the household chores.
I am sure that your parents will be proud of you.
I hope that you had a wonderful weekend.
Tell me about your activities in class.
Teacher Nina
Yes children sometimes do chores.
>> CorrectBecause it is good to have sense of independence.
>> Because it is good to have a sense of independence.
>> OR: Because it is good to be independent.
And doing a housework help their mothers to feel boastiful.
>> Did you mean: And doing housework help their mothers and they feel proud.So I think children sometimes do chores.
>> Correct
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