homework

2014-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Yes children sometimes do chores. Because it is good to have sense of independence. And doing a housework help their mothers to feel boastiful. So I think children sometimes do chores.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Tom. Happy first day of September. ^^ You are right! We should help our parents with the household chores. I am sure that your parents will be proud of you. I hope that you had a wonderful weekend. Tell me about your activities in class. Teacher Nina   Yes children sometimes do chores. >> CorrectBecause it is good to have sense of independence. >> Because it is good to have a sense of independence. >> OR: Because it is good to be independent. And doing a housework help their mothers to feel boastiful. >> Did you mean: And doing housework help their mothers and they feel proud.So I think children sometimes do chores. >> Correct

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