homework
학생이 쓴 원문
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The shrimp lays eggs.
And she is eating fishfood now.
She is grabbing the food and biting it now.
It is so interresting that I could believe it.
강사 첨삭
Good evening TOM ^^
Yahoo! You did a good job!
I am so proud of you.
You are so fortunate to see those things.
As I told you before, I haven\'t seen a shrimp laying eggs. Hihihi.
We should be thankful for all of the thngs that we have.
Use more vocabulary words and try to make longer sentences. I know you can do it.
Good night. Talk to you tomorrow.
Teacher Nina
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>> AThe shrimp lays eggs.
>> CORRECT! And she is eating fishfood now.
>> And it is eating fishfood now. She is grabbing the food and biting it now.
>> It is grabbing the food and biting it now.It is so interresting that I could believe it.
>> It is so interesting that I couldn\'t believe it.
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