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I don't no what do I think is interesting about my own culture.
but my life is interesting.
I am interested how can I get a good mind.(?)
My mother is also interested and wonder how can I get a good mind even there is a bad news.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tom^^I think there are a lot of interesting things about your culture.
I love your food, traditional clothes and people.Every country has a unique thing about their culture.
You just have to be positive even if you are facing challenges and problems.
Don\'t let that bad thing ruin your day or plans.
I hope I was able to help you. Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
I don\'t no what do I think is interesting about my own culture.
>> I don\'t have any idea about the interesting thing in my culture.
>> OR: I don\'t know what is intersting about my culture. but my life is interesting.
>> Correct I am interested how can I get a good mind.(?)
>> Did you mean: I am interested on how can I have a good perspective in life.
>> OR: I am interested on how I can improve my thinking skills more. My mother is also interested and wonder how can I get a good mind even there is a bad news.
>> Did you mean: My mother is also interested and wonders how I can have a good perspective even if there is a bad news.
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