homework

2014-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Myra

학생이 쓴 원문

1. He has a terrible voice; ____undoubtely____________, he will go down in history as the worst singer ever. 2. John has very little money; ___in contrast_____________, his brother Jacob is a millionaire. 3. Roberta didn't have all the ingredients to bake a cake; _______therefore_________, she decided to prepare something else. 4. He couldn't tell her the truth; ___finally_____________, he lied. 5. I really don't know why he came; ____otherwise____________, I would tell you.

강사 첨삭



Happy Thursday Miss [이름]! :)

Thanks for being diligent today. :)
You\'re an amazing woman for managing your time well with your career, studies and family life.
Great job! :D

Keep smiling :D
~~~Teacher Myra~~~

1. He has a terrible voice; ____undoubtely____________, he will go down in history as the worst singer ever.
>>CORRECT
2. John has very little money; ___in contrast_____________, his brother Jacob is a millionaire.

>>CORRECT
3. Roberta didn\'t have all the ingredients to bake a cake; _______therefore_________, she decided to prepare something else.
>>CORRECT
4. He couldn\'t tell her the truth; ___finally_____________, he lied.

>>INSTEAD
5. I really don\'t know why he came; ____otherwise____________, I would tell you.
>>CORRECT

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·