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2014-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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excited. interesting bored terrifing disappointed boring embarrassed disappointed exciting interesting My classmates and I have a class named 'Sea Walker'. We puted on our helmet that full of air. We saw many fishes and sea grasses. The radio station interviewed us.

강사 첨삭

Fantastic story from you TOM^^ I am sure that you had a great time there. It\'s good that you saw a lot of fishes. Did you see an unusual or uncommon fish? Oh my god! I am excited to hear your stories in class. I provided the corrections below.Please go over and use the words often. Take Care! Enjoy the rest of the day. Teacher Nina   excited. >> CORRECT interesting >> CORRECT bored >> CORRECT terrifing >> CORRECT  (TERRIFYING ^^)disappointed >> CORRECT boring >> CORRECT embarrassed >> EMBARRASSING disappointed >> DISAPPOINTING exciting >> EXCITED interesting >> INTERESTED My classmates and I have a class named \'Sea Walker\'. >> My classmates and I made a name for our class, it is \"Sea Walker\". >> OR: My classmates and I have a class name, \" Sea Walker\". We puted on our helmet that full of air. >> We put on our helmet that was full of air. >> OR: We put on a helmet that has oxygen. We saw many fishes and sea grasses. >> CORRECT The radio station interviewed us. >> CORRECT

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