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2014-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hello Chelsea. Sorry I'm late. I didn't have time because I went to the business trip. Anyway, I think that office uniform is important. Office uniform can protect my dress from damage. and Make to feel sense of beloning. But I don't like uniform. Because, That is not stylish. ^^;

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Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ Don\'t worry about it! I understand! Anyway, I agree with you! It has an advantage but it isn\'t stylish! Please check those correction I made and I\'ll see you on Thursday! Have a great day and enjoy your vacation^^ ~T.Chelsea Hello Chelsea.>> Correct^^Sorry I\'m late. >> Correct^^I didn\'t have time because I went to the business trip.>> I didn\'t have time because I went on a business trip.Anyway, I think that office uniform is important. >> Correct^^Office uniform can protect my dress from damage. and Make to feel sense of beloning. >> Office uniform can protect my clothes from an damage and it can make me feel a sense of belongingness.But I don\'t like uniform. Because, That is not stylish. ^^; >> But I don\'t like wearing uniform becayse it\'s not stylish.^^

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