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2014-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think it is pilot. I feel interesting when I wonder riding airplane. I will see land of America,Korea,UK and Southeast Asia. But It would be dangerous.

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T.G.I.F. Tom!! It\'s the end of the line again. ^_^We are going to have a long weekend. ^^ Happy holiday! I am sure that you will have a wonderful time with your family, relatives and friends.I am excited to hear your stories again. You are right! Being a pilot is fun but remember, you are also responsible for the lives of other people. It needs a lot of training and he/ she should always think about the passengers\' safety. Thank you for a great essay, Thank to you soon. Have a nice holiday. Thank you so much for this week, Tom. Teacher Nina   I think it is pilot. >> CORRECT >> OR: I think being a pilot is fun. I feel interesting when I wonder riding airplane. >> I am wondering about riding an airplane. >> OR: I am interested about the feeling on riding an airplane. I will see land of America,Korea,UK and Southeast Asia. >> CORRECT >> OR: I will be able to visit the places: America, Korea, UK and Southeast Asian countries. But It would be dangerous. >> CORRECT

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