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Hello there :D I'm really sorry about the fact that I almost forgot the homework. Sorry :'( This is the final day before we get such a long holiday. Did you make any plan for this day? I have one. :) As you spoke about motivation, yeah, it's quiet important thing to do anything. My motivation is that I want to talk with foreingers fluently. I remember that you were surprised by what I want to be a soldier. But if you know the most powerful ally in Korea, you can understand me. Anyway, see you soon. <Homework> The main purpose of a vacation is to do something what I didn't do because of lack of time. It could be to study more or travel around or work out, etc. Actually what I did during the vacation is only exercise and English talking and a game. I wanted to do a part time job...

Hello [이름]!   Better late than never. I think you are really highly motivated. That\'s really great. Whenever you construct sentences especially with a series, use parallel structure.   Enjoy doing your other homework.^^   Teacher Venus^^     The main purpose of a vacation is to do something what I didn\'t do because of lack of time. >>>The main purpose of a vacation is to do something that I didn\'t do because of lack of time.   It could be to study more or travel around or work out, etc. >>>It could be to study more or to travel around or to work out, etc.   Actually what I did during the vacation is only exercise and English talking and a game. >>>Actually what I did during the vacation is only exercising, speaking in English and playing games.   I wanted to do a part time job. >>>CORRECT