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2014-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello there? I'm late, right? You know, when a holiday comes out, I wanna take a rest rather than doing work. Anyway, the most important thing is what I didn't forget and I'm done this finally. hahaha Sorry for execuses. You told me that you don't have a Thanksgiving Day, then how did you send a holiday? With a work or rest like me? Just I wonder. Then see you on Thursday. -[이름]- <Homework> If I have a power to invent anything I want, then I'll make a teleporter to be easy to move to other places. How do you think about this? If we have this, we can go anywhere we want to go without wasting time. But I'm quiet sure that I can't see this while I'm alive.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   Wow! That\'s an amazing power. I enjoyed reading your homework. I just want to remind you that for unreal or impossible situations, the second conditional is usually used. Use past tense for the if clause and for the main clause, use would. Have a nice day.   Teacher Venus^^   If I have a power to invent anything I want, then I\'ll make a teleporter to be easy to move to other places. >>>If I had a power to invent anything I want, I would make a teleporter for me to easily move to other places.   How do you think about this? >>>What do you think about this?   If we have this, we can go anywhere we want to go without wasting time. >>>If we had this, we could go anywhere we want to go without wasting time.   But I\'m quiet sure that I can\'t see this while I\'m alive. >>>But I\'m quiet sure that I won\'t be able to see this while I\'m alive.

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