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What is the best thing in the world that you have and why?
Answer in 5 sentences.
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I have a LG smart phone. Even if the brand power of LG is behind SAMSUNG in the world and also Korea, their technical skills is almost same level compared with SAMSUNG's.
I usually use my phone to read a e-mail, chat on line, take a photo, watch the TV and listen to the radio, etc.
My smart phone become indispensable in my life.
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~~Teacher Myra
What is the best thing in the world that you have and why?
Answer in 5 sentences.
I have a LG smart phone.
>>CORRECT
Even if the brand power of LG is behind SAMSUNG in the world and also Korea, their technical skills is almost same level compared with SAMSUNG\'s.
>>Even if the brand power of LG is behind SAMSUNG in the world and also in Korea, their technical skills are almost the same level compared with SAMSUNG\'s.
I usually use my phone to read a e-mail, chat on line, take a photo, watch the TV and listen to the radio, etc.
>>CORRECT, but it should be -- watch TV
My smart phone become indispensable in my life.
>>My smart phone is indispensable in my life.
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