Homework

Hello once again Mr. [이름]!
Thanks for sharing what happened to you during your holiday.

It seems like you were mentally and emotionally tortured. hahaha

But since it is part of your culture, you still have to set aside other issues and just spend the time with your family.
As they say, the home is where the family is.

Your family will be the last thing standing when all else fails and when everybody left you.

Anyway, thanks for your time today!

Enjoy the rest of the day.

Always,
Kathrine ^^

We do not have any overrated holiday in Korea.

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Someone says why the Korean needs 3 days to spend one day of holiday.

>>  Someone asked why Koreans need to spend 3 days for one day holiday?

But, it is essential, because we need each one day more of the fore and the rear of a real ond day\'s holiday to visit their hometown.

>>  But it is essential because we need the day before and after the holiday to travel to our hometown and one day is for the holiday.

The Korean industry has remarkably developed, since the beginning of 1970 year.

>>  The Korean industry has remarkably developed, since the beginning of 1970.

It was a normal phenomenon that young people has crushed to industrial area or metropolis to get a job.

>>  It was a normal phenomenon that young people have crushed to the  industrial areas or metropolis to get a job.

So, when we have an holiday, one day is not enough to visit their parent and back to their home.

>>  So, when we have a holiday, one day is not enough to visit their parent and be back to their homes.

I think that all holidays are not overrated, and it is organized well, I think.

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>> or: I think that all holidays are not overrated and it is very well organized.

Nowday, I am worrying that it seems like we are lossing our emotional communication.

>>  Nowadays, I am worrying that it seems like we are losing our emotional communication.

Sometimes, I feel that I am jst a part of a big social sytstem to earn money, and we are just working mechanically.

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So, it is very important to meet and communicate with families and relatives through these big holidays.

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And, we could realize where my family\'s root is derived from.

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When I visit my ancestor\'s graves in this holiday, I could feel a strong affection of family.

>>  When I visited my ancestor\'s graves during the holiday, I could feel a strong affection towards my family.

Nothing better than a family, who can comfort me and make me relieved mentally.

>>  Nothing is better than a family, who can comfort me and make me relieved mentally.