homework
학생이 쓴 원문
We don't have a Thanksgiving day in Korea.
It is so sad.
If there is a thanksgiving day,It will be fun.
I'll eat a lot of pumpkine pies and turkeys.
강사 첨삭
Good Thursday to you Tom!
Oh! You do have a Thanksgiving day. ^^
It is Chuseok. ^^ I am sure that you had fun during the holiday.
I think you were confused. Chuseok in English is Thanksgiving day,
Tell me about your holiday in class.
You wrote perfect sentences today. Keep it up! Awesome!
Keep up the good work. Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
We don\'t have a Thanksgiving day in Korea.>> Correct
It is so sad.
>> Correct If there is a thanksgiving day,It will be fun.
>> Correct I\'ll eat a lot of pumpkine pies and turkeys.
>> Correct ( spelling check: pumpkin ^^)
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