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2014-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hello Chelsea I want to be a leader of my team. When I was asked a same question at interview of this company, I answered "I want to be a member of the team" But It was changed. Because I want to lead my working. I am thinking that my co-workers are not good at working. Of course I may have got the wrong thinking. Anyway I want to lead my working. Actually I have led the team before this company, and I had pretty good. Someday I will be that again.

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Hi there Mr. [이름]^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ Being a leader is difficult but it will be a good challenge and experience. Yeah, I think you will be a good leader in the future. Anyway, I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points. Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea Hello Chelsea>> Hello Chelsea!I want to be a leader of my team. >> CORRECT^^When I was asked a same question at interview of this company, I answered\"I want to be a member of the team\" >> When I was asked the same question in an interview by this company, I answered, \"I want to be a member of a team.\" But It was changed. >> But it changed.Because I want to lead my working. >> Because I want to lead my own team at work.I am thinking that my co-workers are not good at working. >> I think, my co-workers are not good at working. Of course I may have got the wrong thinking. >> Of course, I might have a wrong opinion. Anyway I want to lead my working. >> Anyway, I want to lead my own team at work.Actually I have led the team before this company, and I had pretty good. >> Actually, I have led a team before I work in this company, and it was pretty good.Someday I will be that again. >> Someday, I will be a leader again. >> Someday, I will do that again.

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