homework
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Hello Chelsea
I want to be a leader of my team.
When I was asked a same question at interview of this company, I answered
"I want to be a member of the team"
But It was changed.
Because I want to lead my working.
I am thinking that my co-workers are not good at working. Of course I may have got the wrong thinking. Anyway I want to lead my working.
Actually I have led the team before this company, and I had pretty good.
Someday I will be that again.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Mr. [이름]^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
Being a leader is difficult but it will be a good challenge and experience.
Yeah, I think you will be a good leader in the future.
Anyway, I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points.
Have a great day and take care^^
~T.Chelsea
Hello Chelsea>> Hello Chelsea!I want to be a leader of my team.
>> CORRECT^^When I was asked a same question at interview of this company, I answered\"I want to be a member of the team\"
>> When I was asked the same question in an interview by this company, I answered, \"I want to be a member of a team.\"
But It was changed.
>> But it changed.Because I want to lead my working.
>> Because I want to lead my own team at work.I am thinking that my co-workers are not good at working.
>> I think, my co-workers are not good at working.
Of course I may have got the wrong thinking.
>> Of course, I might have a wrong opinion.
Anyway I want to lead my working.
>> Anyway, I want to lead my own team at work.Actually I have led the team before this company, and I had pretty good.
>> Actually, I have led a team before I work in this company, and it was pretty good.Someday I will be that again.
>> Someday, I will be a leader again.
>> Someday, I will do that again.
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