homework.

2014-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Chelsea. Over population. I think that is cause of the aging population, developement of medical technology and others. But it doesn't seem like that will be come a big problem in the near future. It will be come about 300 years? Reason? I don't know. I hope things do not happen just like that during the my life, my daughter's life and her son or daughter's life. It looks like too much selfish, but I wish everyone have same mind and be careful for environment. For them and their posterity.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again Mr. [이름]^^ Yes, I agree with you! When you\'re a parent, you want everything to be fine for your children. So, for me that\'s not being selfish, you are being a good father. Yes, we have to take care of our environment for the future. Anyway, see you tomorrow^^ ~.T.Chelsea Hello Chelsea.>> Hello Chelsea!Over population. >> CORRECT^^I think that is cause of the aging population, developement of medical technology and others. >> I think over population is caused by aging population, development of medical technology and others.But it doesn\'t seem like that will be come a big problem in the near future. >>  But it doesn\'t seem like it will becoma a big problem in the near future.It will be come about 300 years? >> It will be a problem about 300 years later.Reason? I don\'t know. >> I don\'t know that reason. I hope things do not happen just like that during the my life, my daughter\'s life and her son or daughter\'s life. >> I hope things like that won\'t happen during my life, my daughter\'s life and children\'s life.It looks like too much selfish, but I wish everyone have same mind and be careful for environment. >> It looks too selfish but I wish everyone has the same opinion and take care of the environment.For them and their posterity. >> CORRECT^^

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·