homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Chelsea.
Over population.
I think that is cause of the aging population, developement of medical technology and others.
But it doesn't seem like that will be come a big problem in the near future.
It will be come about 300 years?
Reason? I don't know. I hope things do not happen just like that during the my life, my daughter's life and her son or daughter's life.
It looks like too much selfish, but I wish everyone have same mind and be careful for environment.
For them and their posterity.
강사 첨삭
Hi there again Mr. [이름]^^
Yes, I agree with you!
When you\'re a parent, you want everything to be fine for your children. So, for me that\'s not being selfish, you are being a good father.
Yes, we have to take care of our environment for the future.
Anyway, see you tomorrow^^
~.T.Chelsea
Hello Chelsea.>> Hello Chelsea!Over population.
>> CORRECT^^I think that is cause of the aging population, developement of medical technology and others.
>> I think over population is caused by aging population, development of medical technology and others.But it doesn\'t seem like that will be come a big problem in the near future.
>> But it doesn\'t seem like it will becoma a big problem in the near future.It will be come about 300 years?
>> It will be a problem about 300 years later.Reason? I don\'t know.
>> I don\'t know that reason.
I hope things do not happen just like that during the my life, my daughter\'s life and her son or daughter\'s life.
>> I hope things like that won\'t happen during my life, my daughter\'s life and children\'s life.It looks like too much selfish, but I wish everyone have same mind and be careful for environment.
>> It looks too selfish but I wish everyone has the same opinion and take care of the environment.For them and their posterity.
>> CORRECT^^
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