homework

2014-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

학생이 쓴 원문

1) My mother is in the kitchen. 2) The pupils is not at school today. 3) Maria's grandmother is from Brazil. 4) I am a football fan. 5) It is Sunday today. 6) They are in the car. 7) His pencil case is at home. 8) Are you from Sheffield? 9) I am not your friend. 10) Hey John! We are here. My moral taeach is the my favortive teacher. Because she skip the lesson many time. And she teach the lesson about thing. That 100% set eaxm questions. So I like her. but she has.....bipolar disorder. Her condition is result the weather. Rainny, windy, sunny..The weather exerts her mind. so we somwtime embarrassed.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^
Good job on your homework! ^^ and wonderful job in writing about your favorite teacher. ^^ When you keep expressing yourself in writing and speaking in English, you are going to improve so much faster. ^^

All the best,
==Teacher Charlie==

1) My mother is in the kitchen.
>> CORRECT
2) The pupils is not at school today.
>> The pupils are not at school today.
3) Maria\'s grandmother is from Brazil.
>> CORRECT
4) I am a football fan.
>> CORRECT
5) It is Sunday today.
>> CORRECT
6) They are in the car.
>> CORRECT
7) His pencil case is at home.
>> CORRECT
8) Are you from Sheffield?
>> CORRECT
9) I am not your friend.
>> CORRECT
10) Hey John! We are here.
>> CORRECT


My moral taeach is the my favortive teacher.
>> My Morals teacher is my favorite teacher.
Because she skip the lesson many time. And she teach the lesson about thing.
>> because she skips giving lesson a lot of times and she teaches about various things.
That 100% set eaxm questions.
>> That is a set 100% in the exam questions.
So I like her. but she has.....bipolar disorder.
>> That is why I like her but she has a bipolar disorder.
Her condition is result the weather.
>> Her condition is due to the weather.
Rainny, windy, sunny..The weather exerts her mind.
>> Whether it is rainy, windy, or sunny-- the weather affects her mind.
so we somwtime embarrassed.
>> so we are embarrassed sometimes.

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