homework

2014-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

a a b a a b a b a b Teh fish that I told you yesterday was a tile fish. It has strong fish bones and scales. But it is really delicious that you surprise. You should try it.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Tom. ^^

Happy happy Friday!

Wow! Tile Fish! I want to try it.

Because you told me it is very delicious. ^^

You did a good job. ^^ Keep it up!

Please go over your corrections for your improvement.

If you have any questions, just ask me in class.
Talk to you soon. ^^

Teacher Nina

 

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Teh fish that I told you yesterday was a tile fish.

>> CORRECT ( spelling check: The ^^)

>> OR: The fish that I mentioned in class last night is called Tile fish.
It has strong fish bones and scales.

>> It has a lot of fish bones and scales.
But it is really delicious that you surprise.

>> But it is really delicious that will surprise you.
You should try it.

>> CORRECT

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