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I think most of tourists visit museums in foriegn countries. They want to know all of things about their cultures and histories. Museums of foreign countries show their living methods and thinking manners. From them, tourists get a lot of things about them. So they'd like to visit museums. But, if they chance to meet foriegn friends freely, they don't need to go to museums any more. Because most of tourists want to get chances to meet new foriegn people. Those expriences make them happy and memoriable. I think tourists can't go anywhere exept famous spots in foriegn countries. But if they spend time playing with foriegn friends, they always feel enjoyable. Actually playing with meeting new people is interesting than going meseums in foriegn countries. So whenever I traveled abroad, I always tried to go to their local restaurant and playing stuffs like clubs, pubs and so on. Frankly speaking, memories like those make me laughing. I feel bored when I went to museums.

Hi [이름]! ^.^ Happy Friday! ^^   Very Good!!! ^^ You did a well-written composition. You have directly express your point towards the question I gave you.   However, I still encourage you to widen your knowledge about English writing. You are already good, but I believe you can do better. Keep it up! ^^   Anyway, enjoy your time! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     I think most of tourists visit museums in foriegn countries. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I think most tourists visit museums in foreign countries. They want to know all of things about their cultures and histories. >> They want to know all of things about their culture and history. Museums of foreign countries show their living methods and thinking manners. >> Museums of foreign countries show their natives\' living methods and thinking manners. >> OR: Museums of foreign countries show their natives\' way of living and behavior. From them, tourists get a lot of things about them. >> From them, tourists get a lot of things about other countries and their people. So they\'d like to visit museums. >> Therefore, visitors like to visit museums.But, if they chance to meet foriegn friends freely, they don\'t need to go to museums any more. >> However, if they have a chance to meet foreign friends freely, they don\'t need to go to museums anymore. Because most of tourists want to get chances to meet new foriegn people. >> It is because most of them want to get chances to meet foreigners. Those expriences make them happy and memoriable. >> Those experiences make them happy and have gppd memories.I think tourists can\'t go anywhere exept famous spots in foriegn countries. >> I think tourists can\'t go anywhere except to the famous spots in foreign countries. But if they spend time playing with foriegn friends, they always feel enjoyable. >> On the other hand, if they spend time playing with foreign friends, they will always enjoy. >> OR: On the other hand, if they spend time playing with foreign friends, they will always have an enjoyable time. Actually playing with meeting new people is interesting than going meseums in foriegn countries. >> Actually, playing and meeting with new people is more interesting than going to musuems in other countries.So whenever I traveled abroad, I always tried to go to their local restaurant and playing stuffs like clubs, pubs and so on.>> Therefore, whenever I travel abroad, I always try to go to local restaurants and play stuffs like going clubs, pubs and so on. Frankly speaking, memories like those make me laughing. >> Frankly speaking, memories like those make me laugh. I feel bored when I went to museums. >> I feel bored when I go to museums.