Homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Myra.
This is my homework. Please check this.
- Homework -
If I will say "Sorry" to someone, it would be my mom.
There are so many reasons to say "sorry' to her, but I can think of three main reasons.
First, I take out my anger on her when I am so tired.
And she gave me her love and care so much but I just take it for granted.
Last, I could not spend much time with her these days on the excuse of being busy at work.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I so love our class :))
You are so participative and very cheerful.
Keep that passion in you to learn more because learning does not stop.
I know you can do more and achieve more!
Enjoy the weekend my dear :))
_Teacher Myra_ (^^)
Hello, Myra.
>>CORRECT
This is my homework. Please check this.
>>CORRECT
- Homework -
If I will say \"Sorry\" to someone, it would be my mom.
>>CORRECT
OR>> The person I want to apologize to is my mom.
There are so many reasons to say \"sorry\' to her, but I can think of three main reasons.
>>CORRECT
First, I take out my anger on her when I am so tired.
>>CORRECT
OR> I vent out my anger towards her if I\'m tired.
And she gave me her love and care so much but I just take it for granted.
>>And she gave me her love and care so much but I just took it for granted.
OR>> She loves me unconditionally yet, I took it for granted.
Last, I could not spend much time with her these days on the excuse of being busy at work
>>Lastly, I could not spend much time with her these days on the excuse of being busy at work.
I so love our class :))
You are so participative and very cheerful.
Keep that passion in you to learn more because learning does not stop.
I know you can do more and achieve more!
Enjoy the weekend my dear :))
_Teacher Myra_ (^^)
Hello, Myra.
>>CORRECT
This is my homework. Please check this.
>>CORRECT
- Homework -
If I will say \"Sorry\" to someone, it would be my mom.
>>CORRECT
OR>> The person I want to apologize to is my mom.
There are so many reasons to say \"sorry\' to her, but I can think of three main reasons.
>>CORRECT
First, I take out my anger on her when I am so tired.
>>CORRECT
OR> I vent out my anger towards her if I\'m tired.
And she gave me her love and care so much but I just take it for granted.
>>And she gave me her love and care so much but I just took it for granted.
OR>> She loves me unconditionally yet, I took it for granted.
Last, I could not spend much time with her these days on the excuse of being busy at work
>>Lastly, I could not spend much time with her these days on the excuse of being busy at work.
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