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2014-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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How has your family background affected the way you see the world? my parents are very hard working always and they are honest person. they believed that Efforts are not betraying. that mention told me during childhood. therefore i think the best points are efforts, honest

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

I am very happy to read about your experiences in life. I do know that this could really help you express your opinion in a certain topic at the same time it can develop your skills.

I just have to learn from your mistakes so that you\'ll not commit the same mistakes.

Have a good day!!!

T. Jeny

How has your family background affected the way you see the world?
my parents are very hard working always

>>My parents are always working hard.
and they are honest person.

>>And they are also honest.
they believed that Efforts are not betraying.

>>They believe that great effort will not betray us.
that mention told me during childhood.

>>I think, I mentioned this before.
therefore i think the best points are efforts, honest

>>Therefore, I think the best factors are doing your best and being honest.

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