HOMEWORK

2014-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Myra

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HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY: If you will say "SORRY" to someone, who would it be and why? Answer in 5 sentences. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- If I say 'Sorry' to someone, it would be my friends. Nowadays I haven't contacted them on the pretext of being busy to care children, to work and tired. But my friends don't forget to call me whenever they gather. So I alway feel sorry to them and taking this chance, I make my minds to contact my frineds first before they contact me.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Mr. [이름]!

Happy, happy Monday to you!~ :))
Hope to hear your wonderful stories later.
Also, thank you for spending your precious time to do your homework.
You are very diligent!!!

Also, for sure your friends will understand your situation. In the time being, I\'ve known you and I know that you are a wonderful person inside out! :))

Dream.Believe.Survive!
__Teacher Myra
        

HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:
If you will say \"SORRY\" to someone, who would it be and why?
Answer in 5 sentences.
If I say \'Sorry\' to someone, it would be my friends.
>>
If I will say \'Sorry\' to someone, it would be my friends.
Nowadays I haven\'t contacted them on the pretext of being busy to care children, to work and tired.
>>Nowadays I haven\'t contacted them on the pretext of being busy to care for my children, my work and being tired.
But my friends don\'t forget to call me whenever they gather.
>>CORRECT
OR>>
But my friends don\'t forget to call me whenever they hang out together.
So I alway feel sorry to them and taking this chance, I make my minds to contact my frineds first before they contact me.
>>So I always feel sorry to them and taking this chance, I will make up my mind to contact my friends first before they contact me.

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