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2014-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hello Chelsea. Thanks for your opinion. Someday, I wish I can speak english well. :) I think it is necessary to recycle things. Resources are limited. But people is increasing at this moment. In addition, many people are spending the resource. We need to spend more smart. I think the recycling is one of smart methods.

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Hi there Mr. [이름]^^ Of course yo are my student and I want the best for you! I will help you all the way but of course you also need to help yourself. Anyway, you did great again! Keep it up! I made some corrections! I\'ll call you tomorrow^^ Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea Hello Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^Thanks for your opinion. >> CORRECT^^Someday, I wish I can speak english well. :) >> Someday, I wish I can speak English well. :) >> Someday, I wish I can speak English fluently.I think it is necessary to recycle things. >> CORRECT^^Resources are limited. >> CORRECT^^ But people is increasing at this moment. >> But the population is increasing at this moment.In addition, many people are spending the resource. >> In addition, may people are using a lot of resources.We need to spend more smart. >> We need to use these resources in a smart way.I think the recycling is one of smart methods. >> I think that recycling is one of the smart methods.

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