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2014-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hey there! I'm sorry for that I made you wait for a long time. I slept too late yesterday as if it's still a vacation. I shoudn't have slept late... Surely see you tomorrow! Take care :) <Essay> I'm not sure whethere you want me to tell about favorite book, movie or about what people should read, watch. Anyway, my favorite book is "Tiger im Schlamm" and movie is "Black Hawk Down". Watching Comradeship always makes me feel happy and warm. And I think that people need to feel a strong friendship and comradeship.

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Good morning [이름]! Sorry if it took time. Anyway, I\'m grateful you shared this. Please go over the corrections I wrote. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ Hey there!>> Correct!I\'m sorry for that I made you wait for a long time. >> I\'m sorry that I made you wait for a long time. I slept too late yesterday as if it\'s still a vacation. >> I slept too late yesterday as if it\'s still my vacation. I shoudn\'t have slept late...>> Correct!Surely see you tomorrow! >> I\'ll surely see you tomorrow!Take care :)>> Correct!<Essay>I\'m not sure whethere you want me to tell about favorite book, movie or about what people should read, watch. >> I\'m not sure whether you want me to tell you about  my favorite book, movie or about what people should read or watch. Anyway, my favorite book is \"Tiger im Schlamm\" and movie is \"Black Hawk Down\". >> Correct! Watching Comradeship always makes me feel happy and warm. >> Watching comradeship always makes me feel happy and warm. And I think that people need to feel a strong friendship and comradeship. >> And I think that people need to have strong friendships and comradeship.

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