homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Chelsea~
Thanks for your kindness.
Hm... Honesty... I don't know what about the politics.
I don't have interest politics since when elected this president.
The president is a woman now.
It is not important that president is a woman.
It is important that she is daughter of dictator.
Many people like the dictator. When I was young, I liked him too.
But I have known the truth. But It is a controversial topic.
I don't like a controversy.
Therefore I don't have interest politics.
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for answering you homework.
Yes, most people are not interested in politics.
Anyway, I made some corrections. I\'ll see you again tomorrow^^
~T.Chelsea
Hello Chelsea~>> Hello Chelsea!Thanks for your kindness.>> CORRECT^^Hm... Honesty... I don\'t know what about the politics.
>> Honestly, I don\'t know anything about politics.I don\'t have interest politics since when elected this president.
>> I don\'t have interest in politics since they elected this president.The president is a woman now.
>> The president now is a woman.It is not important that president is a woman.
>> It is not important if the president is a woman or not.It is important that she is daughter of dictator.
>> What\'s important is that she\'s a daughter of a dictator.Many people like the dictator.
>> Many people like dictator.
When I was young, I liked him too.
>> CORRECT^^But I have known the truth. But It is a controversial topic.
>> But I have known the truth and it is a controversial topic.I don\'t like a controversy.
>> I don\'t like controversies.Therefore I don\'t have interest politics.
>> Therefore, I am not interested in politics.
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