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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there.
Do you really think that I was done well? Actually I don't think so. I couldn't say what I want to tell you and made the same mistake again, 'Late'. I hope I won't be late again.
Please let's talk on time.
Take care.
<Essay>
Of course we will be able to adopt diffrent race childs. It will break the streotype we have about this kind of adoption. But before that, we can be considered negetively by people. Anyway, our world is changing to the open world.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
For someone who just wake up, I think you did great.
Don\'t be too hard to yourself. I know you did good but then you can do better than that. ^^
Anyway, I know that you can wake yourself up earlier tomorrow.
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Hi there.
>> Correct!Do you really think that I was done well?
>> Do you really think that I did well?
Actually I don\'t think so. >> Correct!
I couldn\'t say what I want to tell you and made the same mistake again, \'Late\'.
>> I couldn\'t say what I want to tell you and I made the same mistake again, \'Being late\'.
I hope I won\'t be late again.>> Correct!Please let\'s talk on time.
>> Correct!Take care.
>> Correct!<Essay>Of course we will be able to adopt diffrent race childs.
>> Of course we can adopt a child from a different race .
It will break the streotype we have about this kind of adoption.
>> It will break the streotype that we have about this kind of adoption.
But before that, we can be considered negetively by people.
>> But before that, we can be considered negatively by people.
Anyway, our world is changing to the open world.
>> Correct!
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