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2014-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY Rewrite the complete phrases in Simple Past. 1) we washed dishes lastnight to help our mom. 2) I arrived late at school. 3) they destroied my work, so I was so sad. 4) you hurried to finish homework but you didn't complete. 5) she elected her friend on vote. 6) you married last year. 7) we planned to go travel. - 8) he discovered big issue, so he got advantage. 9) they traveled to Europe last summer. 10) I prefered to eat at resturant, but now I prefer to eat at home -

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All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==

1) we washed dishes last night to help our mom.  
>> CORRECT
2) I arrived late at school.  
>> I arrived late to school.
3) they destroied my work, so I was so sad.  
>> I was so sad when they destroyed my work.
4) you hurried to finish homework but you didn\'t complete.  
>> You hurried to finish the homework but you didn\'t complete it.
5) she elected her friend on vote.  
>> She elected her friend in the elections.
6) you married last year.  
>> CORRECT
7) we planned to go travel. -  
>> We planned to travel.
8) he discovered big issue, so he got advantage. 
>> He took advantage of the fact that he discovered a big issue.
9) they traveled to Europe last summer. 
>> They travelled to Europe last summer.
10) I prefered to eat at resturant, but now I prefer to eat at home .
>> I preferred to eat at a restaurant but now I prefer to eat at home.

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