homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If someone need advice from the others, it is more likely to faced difficult problem than comfortable situation.
Men are easily vulnerable to other’s words, but also have abilities to overcome from hardships. Men can make success from their mistakes or experiences. Furthermore, failure is impetus for success.
For this reason, I don’t agree with that is true when we most need advice we are least willing to listen to it. We should hear the advice from others.
강사 첨삭
Speaking of motivation, always ask yourself what is this person\'s end game in giving me this advice? Are they trying to help me determine if my concept can work or do they have some latent and ulterior motive in mind? So, know when to listen. On a second thought, listen to yourself first before seeking for an advice. Anyway, have a good night! Sleep well and sweet dreams!
-Teacher Chloe
If someone need advice from the others, it is more likely to faced difficult problem than comfortable situation.
>>If someone needs advice from others, he or she is more likely to face more difficult problems. Men are easily vulnerable to others words, but also have abilities to overcome from hardships.
>>Men are vulnerable but have abilities to overcome hardships .
>>Men are vulnerable but have abilities to overcome hardships in life.
Men can make success from their mistakes or experiences.
>>Men learn from their mistakes.
Furthermore, failure is impetus for success.
>>Furthermore, failure is impetus to successFor this reason, I dont agree with that is true when we most need advice we are least willing to listen to it.
>>For this reason, I dont agree that when we most need advice we are least willing to listen.
We should hear the advice from others.
>>We should listen others\' advice.
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