homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Because people usually don't wan't the situation that mad at them.
And people want to get a beneifited for only them.
So people sometimes aren't honesty .
I thinf that is the reason.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Tom ^^
You are right! I totally agree with you.
There are times that it is difficult to be honest.
But we have to remember that wen should always tell the truth.
We just have to say it in a nice way.
You did a very nice job with your essay.
Don\'t forget to learn new words, okay?
Talk to you very soon.
Teacher Nina
Because people usually don\'t wan\'t the situation that mad at them.
>> Because people usually don\'t want the sutuation that a person is mad at them. And people want to get a beneifited for only them.
>> Did you mean: And people want to benefit from it.
>> OR: And the people want that they are the only ones who only benefit rom it. So people sometimes aren\'t honesty .
>> So people sometimes aren\'t honest. I thinf that is the reason.
>> Correct ( spelling check: think ^^)
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