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2014-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Is it easy for you to control and hide your anger? Only God can control the anger. Mr. [Name] says in the bile, 'I know that nothing good lives in me'. When he writes this message, his faith has reached full maturity. He is also a great person, but, he confessed like that. As comperison with him, I am nothing. It is not possible to hide my anger. And, it is a human's weakness. When I get angry, I always think the money, at first & also I calculate what I am supposed to lose by anger. Sometimes, my customer gets angry & pours insurts. Although he is angry and insulting me, I thank him, because he gives me money. There is a Russian proverb. 'When money speaks,the truth keeps silent'. I would like to say, when money is angry, I must keep silent. I have both an angel and a satan in my mind, but my angel is always losing. That is why we have to study & read a book. And, we lean on religion to be better person.

강사 첨삭

Hello again Mr. [이름]!

Well, you thoughts here are quite amusing.

You have a little angel and devil in your mind, but your angel keeps on losing.

Too bad. kkkk Why do you let him lose? haha

Maybe because the devil there is money so you could not lose to that and you have to keep your angel\'s mouth shut.

I think that is the reason why your angel keeps losing. Isn\'t it? kkkk
Anyway, sometimes we really have to think of the possible things if we let ourselves get angry.

Talk to you later Mr. [이름]!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


Is it easy for you to control and hide your anger? 
 Only God can control the anger.

>>  Only God can control anger.

Mr. [Name] says in the bile, \'I know that nothing good lives in me\'.

>>  correct! (Bible)
 When he writes this message, his faith has reached full maturity.

>>  When he wrote this message, his faith has already reached full maturity.

He is also a great person, but, he confessed like that.

>>  correct!
 As comperison with him, I am nothing.

>>  As a comparison to him, I am nothing.

It is not possible to hide my anger.

>>  It is possible for me to hide my anger.

And, it is a human\'s weakness.

>>  It is human\'s weakness.
 When I get angry, I always think the money, at first & also I calculate what I am supposed to lose by anger.

>>  When I get angry, I always think and calculate about the money  I would lose because of my anger.
 Sometimes, my customer gets angry & pours insurts.

>>  Sometimes, my customers get angry and tell insults to me.

Although he is angry and insulting me, I thank him, because he gives me money.

>>  Although he is angry and insulting me, I still have to hank him because he give me money.
 There is a Russian proverb. \'When money speaks,the truth keeps silent\'. 

>>  correct!
 I would like to say, when money is angry, I must keep silent.

>>  correct!
 I have both an angel and a satan in my mind, but my angel is always losing.

>>  correct! 
 That is why we have to study & read a book.

>>  correct!

And, we lean on religion to be better person.

>>  And we have to lean on to our religion to be a better person.


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