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2014-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I think we sometimes afraid of admitting that we need other people in our lives. The most important part of the life is related to self-reliance and independence. Because there are so many people that they can’t manage to their economic situation and spiritual situation as an adult. When the people grew up, they should take responsibility in everything. Therefore, self-reliance is very important. But there are so many times we need to help at some point in our lives. But asking help also have to get used to someone. That’s why we sometimes feel afraid of admitting others help.

강사 첨삭

Find out how it could benefit you and how it could hurt you to ask someone for help. If the negatives overrule the positives, then maybe it \'s a figure-it-out-yourself kind of situation. But if you find yourself liking the positives, you can just throw away the negatives. Anyway, have an interesting and exciting weekend. Have a good night! Sleep tight and happy dreams! -Teacher Chloe I think we sometimes afraid of admitting that we need other people in our lives. >>I think, we are sometimes afraid of admitting to ourselves that we need other people in our lives. The most important part of the life is related to self-reliance and independence. >>Self reliance and indepence are important in our lives. Because there are so many people that they can’t manage to their economic situation and spiritual situation as an adult. >>There are so many people who cannot manage to do something about their economic and spirituality status. When the people grew up, they should take responsibility in everything. >>When people are grown up, they should take responsibility of themselves and everything. Therefore, self-reliance is very important. >>Correct! But there are so many times we need to help at some point in our lives. >>But there are so many times taht wee need help in some points of our lives. But asking help also have to get used to someone. >>Asking a help is also a [이름]ice. Thats why we sometimes feel afraid of admitting others help. >>That is why we sometimes feel afraid of asking help from others.

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