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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello teacher Nina :)
Although It may be just my feeling, I think My english speacking skills have gotten better.
And our class is less nervous than first!
Right after today's class, I lend the book 'Chicken Soup for the Soul' that you recommended me in class.
When I went to lent the book, there also is one translated in Korean.
So I agonized between the books written in English and in Korean.
Finally I choosed the one written in English because you told me that I can understand it.
Thank you for your recommendation.
I will read it during this weekend!
Because of you, my weekend will be joyful :)
I hope you have a fantastic weekend!
And, this is my homework.
1. If I have time, I will do it.
2. I would like some coffee, please.
3. I promise I will be there.
4. I didn't expect that she would be there.
5. I hope we will be able to do it.
6. I will do it if I didn't know how.
Unfortunatly I spend all capacity given to me.
I will write rest homewerk next writing.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday [이름] ^_^
Thank you for always listening to your corrections.
I am so happy that you borrowed an English book.
I am sure that you can understand it.
If you have any questions about the words that you will encounter, feel free to ask me in class.
I hope that you will have a great weekend.Please feel free to share your feelings, ideas and comments too.
Teacher NIna
Hello teacher Nina :)
>> CORRECT Although It may be just my feeling, I think My english speacking skills have gotten better.
>> Although, it might just be my feeling, I think my English speaking skills have gotten better.>> OR: Although,it might just be my feeling, I think my English speaking skills improved. ( spelling check: speaking ^^ ) And our class is less nervous than first!>> And our class is less nervous than the first. >> OR: And our class is less nerve wracking than the first one.
Right after today\'s class, I lend the book \'Chicken Soup for the Soul\' that you recommended me in class.
>> Right after today\'s class, I borrowed the book titled \" Chicken Sou[ for the Soul\" that you recommended me in class. When I went to lent the book, there also is one translated in Korean.
>> When I went to borrow the book, there was also one that is translated in Korea.So I agonized between the books written in English and in Korean.
>> I was agonized betweent the books writeen in English and in Korean. Finally I choosed the one written in English because you told me that I can understand it.
>> Finally, I chose the one writeen in English because you told me that I can understand it.Thank you for your recommendation.
>> CORRECT I will read it during this weekend!
>> CORRECT Because of you, my weekend will be joyful :)
>> CORRECT I hope you have a fantastic weekend!
>> I hope that you will have a fantastic weekend. And, this is my homework.>> CORRECT
1. If I have time, I will do it.
>> CORRECT 2. I would like some coffee, please.
>> CORRECT 3. I promise I will be there.
>> CORRECT 4. I didn\'t expect that she would be there.
>> CORRECT 5. I hope we will be able to do it.
>> CORRECT 6. I will do it if I didn\'t know how.
>> would\'t Unfortunatly I spend all capacity given to me.
>> Unfortunately, I used all of the spaces given to me.>> OR: Unfortunately, I already used the capacity for my homework. I will write rest homewerk next writing.
>> I will write the rest of my homework next time.
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