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2014-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hello teacher Nina :) Although It may be just my feeling, I think My english speacking skills have gotten better. And our class is less nervous than first! Right after today's class, I lend the book 'Chicken Soup for the Soul' that you recommended me in class. When I went to lent the book, there also is one translated in Korean. So I agonized between the books written in English and in Korean. Finally I choosed the one written in English because you told me that I can understand it. Thank you for your recommendation. I will read it during this weekend! Because of you, my weekend will be joyful :) I hope you have a fantastic weekend! And, this is my homework. 1. If I have time, I will do it. 2. I would like some coffee, please. 3. I promise I will be there. 4. I didn't expect that she would be there. 5. I hope we will be able to do it. 6. I will do it if I didn't know how. Unfortunatly I spend all capacity given to me. I will write rest homewerk next writing.

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Happy Friday [이름] ^_^ Thank you for always listening to your corrections. I am so happy that you borrowed an English book. I am sure that you can understand it. If you have any questions about the words that you will encounter, feel free to ask me in class. I hope that you will have a great weekend.Please feel free to share your feelings, ideas and comments too. Teacher NIna   Hello teacher Nina :) >> CORRECT Although It may be just my feeling, I think My english speacking skills have gotten better. >> Although, it might just be my feeling, I think my English speaking skills have gotten better.>> OR: Although,it might just be my feeling, I think my English speaking skills improved. ( spelling check: speaking ^^ ) And our class is less nervous than first!>> And our class is less nervous than the first. >> OR: And our class is less nerve wracking than the first one. Right after today\'s class, I lend the book \'Chicken Soup for the Soul\' that you recommended me in class. >> Right after today\'s class, I borrowed the book titled \" Chicken Sou[ for the Soul\" that you recommended me in class. When I went to lent the book, there also is one translated in Korean. >> When I went to borrow the book, there was also one that is translated in Korea.So I agonized between the books written in English and in Korean. >> I was agonized betweent the books writeen in English and in Korean. Finally I choosed the one written in English because you told me that I can understand it. >> Finally, I chose the one writeen in English because you told me that I can understand it.Thank you for your recommendation. >> CORRECT I will read it during this weekend! >> CORRECT Because of you, my weekend will be joyful :) >> CORRECT I hope you have a fantastic weekend! >> I hope that you will have a fantastic weekend. And, this is my homework.>> CORRECT 1. If I have time, I will do it. >> CORRECT 2. I would like some coffee, please. >> CORRECT 3. I promise I will be there. >> CORRECT 4. I didn\'t expect that she would be there. >> CORRECT 5. I hope we will be able to do it. >> CORRECT 6. I will do it if I didn\'t know how. >> would\'t Unfortunatly I spend all capacity given to me. >> Unfortunately, I used all of the spaces given to me.>> OR: Unfortunately, I already used the capacity for my homework. I will write rest homewerk next writing. >> I will write the rest of my homework next time.

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