Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there!
I really like a blessed Friday! The truth that tommrrow is a weekned always makes me happy. haha So when a weekend is over, I fell gloomy a little. :'( I always think I wish tommrow is a new weekend. kkk
Anyway, see you soon, Jessie. :D
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I often listen to music for dealing with anger as possible as I can and try to forget about what happend before. But the anger always come up abruptly unpredictably, so it is quiet hard to calm the anger for me, and for all of us I guees. And whatelse? Maybe playing a game is also a one of ways to calm myself.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!Thanks for always answering your homework.^^Anyway, I think for you to feel much better today, you should think that tomorrow is Friday. Kkkk!
Thanks for sharing this, at least I\'ve known a bit more about you.
I can make you angry during our class and see how you deal with it. Hahaha! Just kidding!
Well, please check the corrections I made in your sentences,
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~Hi there!>> Correct!I really like a blessed Friday! >> Correct!The truth that tommrrow is a weekned always makes me happy. >> The truth that tomorrow is a weekend always makes me happy. haha So when a weekend is over, I fell gloomy a little. :\'( >> So when a weekend is over, I feel a little gloomy. :\'( I always think I wish tommorow is a new weekend. Kkk>> I always think,\" I wish tomorrow is a new weekend. \"KkkAnyway, see you soon, Jessie. :D>> Correct!<Essay>I often listen to music for dealing with anger as possible as I can and try to forget about what happend before. >> I often listen to music to deal with my anger and try to forget about what happened before. OR>> As much as possible, I listen to music and forget about what happened to deal with my anger.But the anger always come up abruptly unpredictably, so it is quiet hard to calm the anger for me, and for all of us I guees. >> But anger always comes up abruptly, unpredictably, so it is quite hard to calm myself when I'm angry, and for all of us I guess. And whatelse? >> And what else? Maybe playing a game is also a one of ways to calm myself.>> Maybe playing a game is also one of the ways to calm myself.
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