Homework.^^
학생이 쓴 원문
hi, Teacher.^^
here my homework.
COMPOSITION WRITING: What things do you think are beautiful?
I think have goal to live peole.
They are beautiful.
also, I think help hard people, each other peaceful live.
They are beautiful.
It will be happy.
Teacher I'm sorry.
Because postpone the class 2 days.
I'm have considerate.
I'm so sorry.
Many sad.
Next class Wednesday.
Bye. Have a good day. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hello Alice^^
I understand that you\'re busy. I\'m going to miss you for two days. Enjoy your day.
Teacher Venus^^
I think have goal to live peole.
>>> I have a goal to help people live.
They are beautiful.
>>>CORRECT
also, I think help hard people, each other peaceful live.
>>>Also, I want to help people in a difficult situation to have a peaceful life.
They are beautiful.
>>>CORRECT
It will be happy.
>>>I will be happy.
>>>OR: They will be happy.
I understand that you\'re busy. I\'m going to miss you for two days. Enjoy your day.
Teacher Venus^^
I think have goal to live peole.
>>> I have a goal to help people live.
They are beautiful.
>>>CORRECT
also, I think help hard people, each other peaceful live.
>>>Also, I want to help people in a difficult situation to have a peaceful life.
They are beautiful.
>>>CORRECT
It will be happy.
>>>I will be happy.
>>>OR: They will be happy.
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