Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Myra.
I always enjoy our class and love to talk to you.
Today's homework question is a very philosophic one. I like this kind of questions because it makes me think deeply about something.
Please check my essay and have a great day.
<Question>
What is the difference between permanent and temporary happiness?
<Answer>
I think that both the permanent and temporary happiness are equally important in our lives.
The temporary happiness is the emotion we feel when our basic needs are being met.
For example, when we eat delicious food and sleep well, we feel happy for the moment.
On the other hand, the permanent happiness is close to the satisfaction of something, such as a relationship with others, achieving our goals, and so on.
I think the biggest difference between those two is that we can get the permanent happiness only if we know how to be happy ourselves.
강사 첨삭
Miss [이름], hi there!! (^_~)
Terrific Tuesday to you!
Thank you very much for appreciating me as your teacher.
I also enjoy every minute of our class!
You share a lot and very engaging. You also have a good sense of humor my dear! (^.~)
\"The person who gets the farthest is generally the one who is willing to do and dare. The sure-thing boat never gets far from shore.\"
--Dale Carnegie
Keep fighting!!!
~~Teacher Myra~~
Hello Myra.
I always enjoy our class and love to talk to you.
>>CORRECT
Better>> I always enjoy our class and I love to talk with you.
Today\'s homework question is a very philosophic one. I like this kind of questions because it makes me think deeply about something.
>>Today\'s homework is a very philosophic one. I like these kinds of questions because it makes me think deeply about something.
Please check my essay and have a great day.
>>CORRECT
<Question>
What is the difference between permanent and temporary happiness?
<Answer>
I think that both the permanent and temporary happiness are equally important in our lives.
>>I think that both permanent and temporary happiness are equally important in our lives.
The temporary happiness is the emotion we feel when our basic needs are being met.
>>Temporary happiness is the emotion we feel when our basic needs are being met.
For example, when we eat delicious food and sleep well, we feel happy for the moment.
>>CORRECT
On the other hand, the permanent happiness is close to the satisfaction of something, such as a relationship with others, achieving our goals, and so on.
>>On the other hand, permanent happiness is close to the satisfaction of something, such as a relationship with others, achieving our goals, and so on.
I think the biggest difference between those two is that we can get the permanent happiness only if we know how to be happy ourselves.
>>I think the biggest difference between those two is that we can get permanent happiness only if we know how to be happy with ourselves.
Terrific Tuesday to you!
Thank you very much for appreciating me as your teacher.
I also enjoy every minute of our class!
You share a lot and very engaging. You also have a good sense of humor my dear! (^.~)
\"The person who gets the farthest is generally the one who is willing to do and dare. The sure-thing boat never gets far from shore.\"
--Dale Carnegie
Keep fighting!!!
~~Teacher Myra~~
Hello Myra.
I always enjoy our class and love to talk to you.
>>CORRECT
Better>> I always enjoy our class and I love to talk with you.
Today\'s homework question is a very philosophic one. I like this kind of questions because it makes me think deeply about something.
>>Today\'s homework is a very philosophic one. I like these kinds of questions because it makes me think deeply about something.
Please check my essay and have a great day.
>>CORRECT
<Question>
What is the difference between permanent and temporary happiness?
<Answer>
I think that both the permanent and temporary happiness are equally important in our lives.
>>I think that both permanent and temporary happiness are equally important in our lives.
The temporary happiness is the emotion we feel when our basic needs are being met.
>>Temporary happiness is the emotion we feel when our basic needs are being met.
For example, when we eat delicious food and sleep well, we feel happy for the moment.
>>CORRECT
On the other hand, the permanent happiness is close to the satisfaction of something, such as a relationship with others, achieving our goals, and so on.
>>On the other hand, permanent happiness is close to the satisfaction of something, such as a relationship with others, achieving our goals, and so on.
I think the biggest difference between those two is that we can get the permanent happiness only if we know how to be happy ourselves.
>>I think the biggest difference between those two is that we can get permanent happiness only if we know how to be happy with ourselves.
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