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Hello [이름]
I know that we too much dependent on computers these days. I do hope we can still find time to go back and experience the old days.
But we need to face reality and adapt with the changes. I hope that you can also adapt and study English more so that you can achieve your goals in the future.
T.Jeny
I think that’s right.
>>I think that is right.
>>I think I agree with this sentence.
if we don’t used the computer, unfortunately can\'t connecting every morning.
>>I can\'t connect to the internet every morning, if I don\'t have a computer.
and I can\'t maintain my business never.
>>I couldn\'t run my business.
because my business is sale on internet all product.
>>Because I sell my products online.
and I working in my office to using computer.
>>I also use the computer while working.
I think that too dependent on computer is not good.
>>I think depending on the computer too much isn\'t good.
but unfortunately don\'t escape this situation me too.
>>But unfortunately, we can\'t escape from this situation.
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