Homework

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!

Well, as they say, a home is where the heart is.

So you feel comfort and peaceful whenever you are with your family and no other things could replace that.

But I guess in your situation, your family is also the one giving you stress since they are pressuring you to get married. Isn\'t it? hahaha.

Kidding aside, I know that whatever issues you have with your family, they would still be there for you.
See you minutes later!

Always,

Kathrine ^^

Where do you think is the perfect place to hide from all the stress in this world?
I think there is no place in this world.

>> correct!

Only my home & family can give me a rest and comfort.

>> correct! 
 We do not know what my future will be hold on my hand.

>> I do not hold my future on my hands.
 When we are facing an uncertain future, somebody could say that would be exciting, so that they could enjoy and willingly challenge against a risk, and they could expect what they would achieve soon, after passing this moment.

>> When we are facing an uncertain future, somebody could say that it would be exciting, so that they could enjoy and willingly challenge against the risk, and they could expect what they would have achieved soon, after passing this moment.
 Sometimes, we are facing a new situations like moving, promotion, new job with new people.

>> Sometimes, we are facing new situations like moving to new places, promotion, new job, and meeting with new people.

In this case, we can not help facing a big stress.

>> In this case, we can not help but to these big stress.

We may need our brave and confidence to struggle against this situation.

>> We may need to be brave and confident to face these situations.

Certainly, I feel nervous.

>> correct!

>> or: I certainly feel nervous.

We must pass or experience these situation in life.

>> We must pass or experience these situations in life.
 Unfortunately, I already realize that I prefer a stable life, because I want to be free from a big stress. 

>> Unfortunately, I already realize that I prefer a stable life, because I want to be free from the big stress. 

 Now, I am trying to make a stable life with a sweat family.

>> Now, I am trying to make a stable life with a sweet family.

>> or: Now, I am trying to make a stable and sweet life with my  family.

Although I face another problem with a big stress, but, I know the comfort what my family gives, will be much happier.

>> Although I am facing another problem which is so stressful, yet I know that the comfort that my family gives is happier.