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What is the difference between permanent and temporary happiness?
Answer in 5 sentences
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To be honest, I don't know the difference between permanent and temporary happiness but I think permanent happiness is that we, all were already rescued by GOD and we have a family.
Whereas, in case of temporary happiness, we feel happy temorarily when we buy something we want to have, when we eat food we want to eat and something like that.
And I think temporary happiness can be mostly fulfilled by money.
That's why I work hard for myself and my family.
강사 첨삭
Mr. [이름], hi there!! (^_~)
Terrific Tuesday to you!
We don\'t have classes but still, I do hope you\'re always alright.
Keep safe my student!!!
See you tomorrow night!(^^.)
\"The person who gets the farthest is generally the one who is willing to do and dare. The sure-thing boat never gets far from shore.\"
--Dale Carnegie
~~Teacher Myra~~
What is the difference between permanent and temporary happiness?
Answer in 5 sentences
To be honest, I don\'t know the difference between permanent and temporary happiness but I think permanent happiness is that we, all were already rescued by GOD and we have a family.
>>To be honest, I don\'t know the difference between permanent and temporary happiness but I think permanent happiness is that we, were all rescued by God and that we have a family.
Whereas, in case of temporary happiness, we feel happy temporarily when we buy something we want to have, when we eat food we want to eat and something like that.
>>CORRECT
OR>> On the other hand, temporary happiness is when we are satisfied with material things like food.
And I think temporary happiness can be mostly fulfilled by money.
>>CORRECT
>> And I think temporary happiness is brought about by money.
That\'s why I work hard for myself and my family.
>>CORRECT
Terrific Tuesday to you!
We don\'t have classes but still, I do hope you\'re always alright.
Keep safe my student!!!
See you tomorrow night!(^^.)
\"The person who gets the farthest is generally the one who is willing to do and dare. The sure-thing boat never gets far from shore.\"
--Dale Carnegie
~~Teacher Myra~~
What is the difference between permanent and temporary happiness?
Answer in 5 sentences
To be honest, I don\'t know the difference between permanent and temporary happiness but I think permanent happiness is that we, all were already rescued by GOD and we have a family.
>>To be honest, I don\'t know the difference between permanent and temporary happiness but I think permanent happiness is that we, were all rescued by God and that we have a family.
Whereas, in case of temporary happiness, we feel happy temporarily when we buy something we want to have, when we eat food we want to eat and something like that.
>>CORRECT
OR>> On the other hand, temporary happiness is when we are satisfied with material things like food.
And I think temporary happiness can be mostly fulfilled by money.
>>CORRECT
>> And I think temporary happiness is brought about by money.
That\'s why I work hard for myself and my family.
>>CORRECT
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