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2014-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi again, Jessie. That sounds sad that you coudn't have a nice weekend because of the typoon. And I'm a little surprised that the typoon is coming to here. I hope Japan blocks him away. kkk Don't worry about me feeling not well when you correct my errors. I always take that advice delightedly because it is the best thing that can help me improve my English skill. Why do I feel bad? I know I'm not good at speaking yet. But I will be a person like native speakers! :D Have a good day~ <Essay> I would be a pilot! I always long for being a pilot who fly into the sky. My first dream was to be a pilot, but that was too hard for me, so I had to give up. Actually I had no confidence for that I can be. So if I can be anything I want, then my choice is a pilot.

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I\'m glad to hear that. That\'s the spirit [이름]! You will be like the native speakers. I know you can be. So just keep on striving. Anyway, I hope your dream will come true^^, And I also hope that your confidence will improve. Believe in what you can do [이름]! See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ Hi again, Jessie.>> Correct!That sounds sad that you coudn\'t have a nice weekend because of the typoon. >> Correct! And I\'m a little surprised that the typoon is coming to here. >> And I\'m a little surprised that the typoon is coming here. I hope Japan blocks him away. kkk>> Correct!Don\'t worry about me feeling not well when you correct my errors. >> Correct! I always take that advice delightedly because it is the best thing that can help me improve my English skill. >> Correct! Why do I feel bad? >> Correct! OR>> Why would I feel bad? I know I\'m not good at speaking yet. >> I know that I\'m not good at speaking yet. But I will be a person like native speakers! :D>> But I will be like the native speakers! :DHave a good day~>> Correct!<Essay>I would be a pilot! >> Correct! I always long for being a pilot who fly into the sky. >> I always long to be a pilot who flies planes in the sky. My first dream was to be a pilot, but that was too hard for me, so I had to give up. >> Correct! Actually I had no confidence for that I can be. >> Do you mean:  Actually, I was not confident that I could be a pilot. So if I can be anything I want, then my choice is a pilot. >> Correct!

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