homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When it is good and bad to lie?
In my opinion, there are two types of lie. The first thing is well-intentioned lie which can help someone when the someone get into a trouble. One of these lies is known as the “white lie”. White lie is told in order to be polite or to stop someone from being upset by the truth. I think white lies are necessary from time to time. However, the results of white lies are not always good. Because white lies are still lies.
The second thing is the rest kinds of lies which can hurt someone’s feelings including any kinds of jokes. It is also called the “black lie”. Sometimes, there are someone tell a lie to hurt the others on purpose. In that case, the listeners can be victims. The case is the worst thing.
So, whenever we talk about something to someone, we should be careful.
강사 첨삭
According to what I have read, lying is probably one of the most common wrong acts that we carry out (one researcher has said \"lying is an unavoidable part of human nature\"), so it\'s worth spending time thinking about it. Most people would say that lying is always wrong, except when there\'s a good reason for it - which means that it\'s not always wrong! Anyway, enjoy the rest of your evening Ma\'am.
-Teacher Chloe
When it is good and bad to lie?In my opinion, there are two types of lie.
>>Correct!
The first thing is well-intentioned lie which can help someone when the someone get into a trouble.
>>The first thing is well-intentioned lie which can help someone when in trouble.
One of these lies is known as the white lie.
>>Correct grammar!
>>One of these lies is known as the \"white lie\".
White lie is told in order to be polite or to stop someone from being upset by the truth.
>>Correct!
I think white lies are necessary from time to time.
>>Correct!
However, the results of white lies are not always good.
>>Correct!
Because white lies are still lies.
>>Correct!
>>However, the results of white lies are not always good because there are still lies. The second thing is the rest kinds of lies which can hurt someones feelings including any kinds of jokes.
>>Another type of lie is the one which can hurt someone\'s feeling especially by jokes.
It is also called the black lie.
>>Correct grammar!
>>It is also called the \"black lie\".
Sometimes, there are someone tell a lie to hurt the others on purpose.
>>Sometimes, there are people who tell a lie to hurt others by purpose.
In that case, the listeners can be victims.
>>Correct!
The case is the worst thing.>>Correct!
So, whenever we talk about something to someone, we should be careful.
>>Correct!
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