Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi teacher Nina!
This is the rest of my last homework.
Q7 - Do you think will come if we asked them?
Q8 - I'm really not sure whether I will be free tomorrow.
Q9 - What do you think will happen at the meeting this afternoon?
Q10 - If you had to make a choice, what would you decide on?
And This is my homework this time.
You gave me the topic 'Can fortune-tellers predict the future? Do you believe in them?'.
I don't think every fortune-tellers are liars.
But most of them just pretend to predict the future, I think.
When they tell someone especialy who really wonders about his future, they act to tell him detail, personal and only his future.
But usaully they tell everyone who come to them similar words.
Well, some fortune-tellers may be real.
Nobady knows the whole world. There are so many and various people.
Among people of the world, can a real fortune-teller or so be, can't he?
Oh, today's homework is really messy, I think :(
강사 첨삭
Good day [이름].
Happy Tuesday to you! We reached the second day of the week already.
How\'s your day going? Are you having fun?
Thanks for allotting some time to write an essay.
You are right. There are fortune tellers who might be real.
Let us just respect them and believe in ourselves.
We are still in-charge of our future.
Of course not! Your homework is not messy.
I like how you express your ideas. Great!
Just be careful with your sentence structure. You can do it.
If you have any questions, just raise it in class. Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
Hi teacher Nina!
>> Correct This is the rest of my last homework.
>> Correct >> OR: This is the rest of my homework. Q7 - Do you think will come if we asked them?
>> would Q8 - I\'m really not sure whether I will be free tomorrow.
>> Correct Q9 - What do you think will happen at the meeting this afternoon?
>> Correct Q10 - If you had to make a choice, what would you decide on?
>> Correct And This is my homework this time.
>> Correct
>> OR: This is my homework today. You gave me the topic \'Can fortune-tellers predict the future? Do you believe in them?\'.
>> Correct I don\'t think every fortune-tellers are liars.
>> I don\'t think every fortune teller is a liar,>> OR: I don\'t think all of fortune tellers are liar. But most of them just pretend to predict the future, I think.
>> Correct
>> OR: But I think most of them just pretend to predict the future. When they tell someone especialy who really wonders about his future, they act to tell him detail, personal and only his future.
>> When they tell someone especially who really wonders about his/ her future, they act to tell him/ her in detail and only about it.But usaully they tell everyone who come to them similar words.>> But usually they tell everyone who come similar words.
>> OR: But usually they tell everyone similar things.
Well, some fortune-tellers may be real.
>> Correct Nobady knows the whole world.
>> Correct There are so many and various people.
>> Correct Among people of the world, can a real fortune-teller or so be, can\'t he?
>> Did you mean: Among the people in the world, can there be a real fortune teller?Oh, today\'s homework is really messy, I think :(
>> Correct
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